How should foreigners properly act in a Foreign country?
학생이 쓴 원문
There is a saying that " If you go to Rome, then you sould follow the Rules of Rome".
It is the key point of acting when we go to abroad.
We have to consider other culture's character and try to understand the pattern of local people's way of thinking.
It is also very interesting to obseve the other country's detail through this method.
Meanwhile it is easy to offend the law of foreign country when we keeping on our own style of thinking.
Then we face some serious situation what we do no expect.
So if you have a chance to visit another country then i suggest that it is essential to study the purpose of your visit and try to put yourself in the shoes of the other person.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Derek!^^
Thank you for your ideas!^^
It really does matter that making a goal is very important when we travel.
We never know what to expect. While it is a must to blend in. we must also
follow rules that can prevent us getting into serious trouble!^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you:
There is a saying that \" If you go to Rome, then you sould follow the Rules of Rome\".
>> CORRECT
OR> There is a saying \"When in Rome, do what the Romasn do.\"It is the key point of acting when we go to abroad.
>> CORRECT
OR> It\'s a pointer for people who go abroad.We have to consider other culture\'s character and try to understand the pattern of local people\'s way of thinking.
>> CORRECT
OR> We have to get along with the culture of the locals and blend in.It is also very interesting to obseve the other country\'s detail through this method.
>> CORRECT
OR> It is also very interesting to obseve the other country\'s individaulity and personality through this method. Meanwhile it is easy to offend the law of foreign country when we keeping on our own style of thinking.
>> Meanwhile it is easy to offend the law of a foreign country when we keeping on with our own style of thinking.Then we face some serious situation what we do no expect.
>> Then we face some serious situations that what we do not expect.So if you have a chance to visit another country then i suggest that it is essential to study the purpose of your visit and try to put yourself in the shoes of the other person.
>> So if you have a chance to visit another country then I suggest that it is essential to study the purpose of your visit and try to put yourself in the shoes of the other person.
OR> It is important to set goals for your travel and be brave enough to try things that locals do.
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