How should parents avoid losing a child in a public place?
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I think Parents and children must walk hand in hand because children easy to losing and children is young so some children strangers take children.
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How should parents avoid losing a child in a public place?
I think Parents and children must walk hand in hand because children easy to losing and children is young so some children strangers take children.
>> I think parents and children must walk hand in hand because it’s easy for young kids to be lost and some strangers even take or kidnap them.
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