How should parents best respond to their child’s challenging behavior?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think parents should encourage their children to challenge somethings.
In my friend\'s case, her parents scolded her whenever she tried to do something dangerous.
Then she began to think that it is very dangerous, so I should avoid to challenge.
Even now, she does not try to challenge herself.
She can\'t do anything alone.
However, in my case, I always tried to challenge something interesting with my brother.
Then, I am able to challenge anything even though it seems to be very hard.
Likewise, parents should encourage their kids to challenge themselves without any limitation or restriction.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Chloe!
Here are the corrections.
I think parents should encourage their children to challenge somethings. In my friend\'s case, her parents scolded her whenever she tried to do something dangerous.
>>I think parents should encourage their children to challenge themselves. In my friend\'s case, her parents scolded her whenever she tried to do something dangerous.
Then she began to think that it is very dangerous, so I should avoid to challenge. Even now, she does not try to challenge herself
>>Then she began to think that it is very dangerous, so, she should avoid challenging herself. Even now, she does not try to challenge herself.
She can\'t do anything alone. However, in my case, I always tried to challenge something interesting with my brother.
>>She can\'t do anything alone. However, in my case, I always tried to challenge myself on something interesting with my brother.
Then, I am able to challenge anything even though it seems to be very hard. Likewise, parents should encourage their kids to challenge themselves without any limitation or restriction.
>>Then, I am able to accomplish anything even though it seems to be very hard. Likewise, parents should encourage their kids to challenge themselves without any limitations or restrictions.
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