How significant is being fluent in English for you?

2018-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I've studied English for many years since Middle school. But my English is still poor. So I'm very embarrassed and frustrated. Before I die, I want to become to be fluent in English. So, being fluent in English is significant for me so that becomes one of my bucket lists.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! I appreciate your effort on answering and sending this. Learning a foreign language is indeed difficult, and it takes a long process to really master it. In my case, I was exposed to using English often and it has helped me become more familiar with the language. That was my advantage. We use English as a second language. I guess exposure to it and practice are really important. Nevertheless, I know you are giving an effort to really practice your English. Make learning English a hobby, something you could enjoy. Good luck! All hard work will pay off in due time.

-T. Beth

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I\'ve studied English for many years since Middle school.

>>>CORRECT
>>>OR: I\'ve been studying English for many years since Middle School.

But my English is still poor.

>>> However, my English fluency is still poor.

>>> OR: But my English fluency has not improved.

So I\'m very embarrassed and frustrated.

>>> CORRECT

>>> OR: It makes me feel quite embarrassed and frustrated.

Before I die, I want to become to be fluent in English.

>>> Before I die, I want to be fluent in English.

So, being fluent in English is significant for me so that becomes one of my bucket lists.

>>> That\'s the reason why being fluent in English is significant for me and it has become a part of my bucket list.



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