How significant is social distancing in an epidemic like this?
학생이 쓴 원문
This epidemic need to distance between 2 meters to other people by goverment rule.
This virus is transmitted by spray to other people.
According to recent report, it was trasmitted between 4.5 meters in bus in China.
Especially, this virus can live in plastic until 3 hours. Maybe, we should wear the gloves each other.
But, I was shocking last weekend.
Many people were in the park, resturant like this anywhere. Even, some people did not were the masks.
Although we also went out due to depression, we were nervous through going out.
Recently, the patients who contacted virus are decreasing in Korea.
But many people are not feel about warning.
But there is not starting school until now. Many children are damaged.
We must keep the rule for normal life even for a few weeks.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss [이름]. Thank you for this. I believe if we comply and do exactly what the government is asking, we can overcome this situation sooner.
- T. Beth
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This epidemic need to distance between 2 meters to other people by goverment rule.
>>>> This epidemic requires people to keep a distance of at least 2 meters from each other according to the government\'s rule.
This virus is transmitted by spray to other people.
>>>> This virus is transmitted by spraying to other people.
According to recent report, it was trasmitted between 4.5 meters in bus in China.
>>>> According to recent report, it was transmitted between 4.5 meters in a bus in China.
Especially, this virus can live in plastic until 3 hours.
Especially, this virus can live in plastic until 3 hours.
>>>> Especially, this virus can live on plastic for 3 hours.
Maybe, we should wear the gloves each other.
>>>> Each person should probably need to wear gloves.
But, I was shocking last weekend.
>>>> Each person should probably need to wear gloves.
But, I was shocking last weekend.
>>>> But, I was shocked last weekend.
Many people were in the park, resturant like this anywhere.
>>>> Many people were in the park, restaurant, and anywhere.
Even, some people did not were the masks.
>>>> Some people were even not wearing a mask.
Although we also went out due to depression, we were nervous through going out.
Although we also went out due to depression, we were nervous through going out.
>>>> Although we also went out due to depression, we were nervous all through out that time we were outside.
Recently, the patients who contacted virus are decreasing in Korea.
>>>> Recently, the number of patients who contacted the virus is decreasing in Korea.
But many people are not feel about warning.
>>>> But many people do not feel cautious.
But there is not starting school until now.
But there is not starting school until now.
>>>> The school has not opened yet until now.
Many children are damaged.
>>>> Many children are depressed.
We must keep the rule for normal life even for a few weeks.
We must keep the rule for normal life even for a few weeks.
>>>> We must keep the rule for a normal life even for a few weeks.
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