How study Englsih

2019-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

학생이 쓴 원문

I believe that communicating in Englsih is going to be incredibly beneficial in Global Era. So I always take the extra effort to speak English by having to call my English teacher every morning for 30minutes. Also, Im watching YouTube videos and I do it whenever I can. In some YouTube channels, there are a lot of videos in English about many kinds of topics like living in another country, traveling, speaking English etc. By watching these types of videos, i can learn about not only listening and speakinf English skills but also various experiences indirectly. And i\'ll keep going to study English do my best.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for sending in your composition. Take careful note the proper spelling of some words, the proper punctuations and the necessary capitalizations. I made some corrections on your work and check them below. ~~T.Dee


I believe that communicating in Englsih is going to be incredibly beneficial in Global Era.

>>I believe that communicating in English is going to be incredibly beneficial in the Global Era.

So I always take the extra effort to speak English by having to call my English teacher every morning for 30minutes.

>>This is why I always take the extra effort to speak English by having a conversation with my English teacher every morning for 30 minutes.

Also, Im watching YouTube videos and I do it whenever I can.

>>Also, I\'m watching YouTube videos and I do it whenever I can. (Be mindful of the use of apostrophes.)

>>OR: I also watch YouTube videos in English and I do it whenever I can.

In some YouTube channels, there are a lot of videos in English about many kinds of topics like living in another country, traveling, speaking English etc.

>>CORRECT!

By watching these types of videos, i can learn about not only listening and speakinf English skills but also various experiences indirectly.

>>By watching these types of videos, I can learn not only about listening and speaking in English but I l also learn about various experiences in life indirectly.

And i\'ll keep going to study English do my best.

>>And I\'ll keep going to study English and I\'ll do my best.






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