How technology has changed in my life.
학생이 쓴 원문
Technology hasn\'t changed much in my life. When I was young, the picture quality on my cell phone was not good, so it was difficult to see my childhood clearly. I will be able to see how technology will change in my life from now on. I am old enough to recognize it now.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Stella! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Technology hasn\'t changed much in my life.
>>> CORRECT!
When I was young, the picture quality on my cell phone was not good, so it was difficult to see my childhood clearly.
>>> CORRECT!
I will be able to see how technology will change in my life from now on.
>>> I will be able to see how technology will change my life from now on.
I am old enough to recognize it now.
>>> CORRECT!
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