How to be happy

Dear [Name]. [이름],

A good day to you! ^.^

Happy Thursday! ^^

I am so happy because of your composition.

I will check more about it in The Bible.

Thank you very much! ^^,

Because of your writing, I am wanting to know more things from you.

I will really keep the story you shared with me in mind.

I will always stay positive to have a happy life and to share happiness to other people, too.

By the way, don\'t forget to see the corrections and suggestions below for your writing improvement.

That\'s all for today! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you tomorrow! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

One day, in old days, The king David wanted to have a ring.

>> One day, in old days, King David wanted to have a ring.

So he called an artisan to make a beutiful ring for him.

>> So, he called an artisan to make a beautiful ring for him.

>> OR: Therefore, he called an artisan to make a beautiful ring for him.

And he ordered to carve the phrase into the ring meaning that when I am happy with victory, I should not be haughty and when I am in trouble and defeated, I could be encourged.

>> And, he ordered to carve the phrase into the ring which means that, \"When I am happy with victory, I should not be haughty, and when I am in trouble and defeated, I could be encouraged.\"

The artisian said yes and made a beautiful ring, but he could\'nt think about the phrase that The King said.

>> The artisan said yes and made a beautiful ring, but he couldn\'t think about the phrase that the King said.

So he came to The king Solomon, the son of David, to ask let him know which phrase was good for The king David.

>> So, he came to King Solomon, the son of David, to ask him about the phrase that was good for King David.

The Solomon said after short time of thought, \" This, too, shall pass away\" This phrase is written in the book of Wisdom in Midrash(?), which is most commonly read in Judish.

>> Solomon said after a short time of thought, \"This, too, shall pass away.\" This phrase is written in the book of Wisdom in Midrash, which is most commonly read in Judish.

Everything in the world come and go.

>> Everything in the world comes and goes.

If you were in trouble now, it shall pass away and if you were happy now, it also shall pass away.

>> CORRECT!

I recommend you to keep this phrase in mind and having a life with positive mind.

>> I recommend you to keep this phrase in mind and have a life with positive mind.

>> OR: I recommend you to keep this phrase in mind and have a life full with positive thoughts.

Thank you for reading

>> Thank you for reading!

>> OR: Thank you for reading my composition.