How to beat Monday Blues?
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You might thing I am crazy because I really love Monday because it is quite burden for me to have time with my children during weekends. Children are active and have unlimited energy that I can\'t play with them without break time. Of course, it is the most valuable time for me and I want my children to stop growing because it is only one chance to spend time with them. Based on my experience, I really hate to have time with my parents since I was in the middle school. I wanted to play with my friends rather than having time with family. Although, I love my children, it is true that I feel exhausted to play with them for a days. On weekend, I usually take a good rest that lead me full energy on weekdays. I also like to have a conversation with my colleagues. That\'s reason why I like Monday. haha
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Hi [이름]!^^
Mondays are okay, the only thing that is hard is to wake up early.
I wake up at around 9 AM or 10 AM for weekends, while 7 AM if it\'s a weekday.
My husband always gets mad because I always complain that I don\'t have enough sleep.
Well in fact, I actually have 7 hours of sleep. haha
I feel that 7 AM is really early.
Teacher Andrea
You might thing I am crazy because I really love Monday because it is quite burden for me to have time with my children during weekends.
>> You might thing I am crazy for loving Mondays because it is quite a burden for me to have time with my children during weekends.
Children are active and have unlimited energy that I can\'t play with them without break time.
>> Children are active and have unlimited energy that I can\'t play with them without having a break.
Of course, it is the most valuable time for me and I want my children to stop growing because it is only one chance to spend time with them.
>> Of course, it is the most valuable time for me and I want my children to stop growing up because it is only chance to spend time with them.
Based on my experience, I really hate to have time with my parents since I was in the middle school.
>> Based on my experience, I really hate spending time with my parents when I was in the middle school.
I wanted to play with my friends rather than having time with family.
>> Correct
Although, I love my children, it is true that I feel exhausted to play with them for a days.
>> Although, I love my children, it is true that I feel exhausted to play with them for a day.
On weekend, I usually take a good rest that lead me full energy on weekdays.
>> On weekends. I usually take a good rest leading a full energy on weekdays.
I also like to have a conversation with my colleagues.
>> Correct
That\'s reason why I like Monday. haha
>> That\'s reason why I like Mondays. haha
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