How to choose the restraunt when i visit to the new city.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I go to a new city I choose the restaurant to sell a famous dish in the city. I enjoy to eat the traditional, special or famous food that region. I am not picky about food.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Thomas! Thank you for answering your homework. Keep up the effort in learning and practicing English.
-Teacher Joy
When I go to a new city I choose the restaurant to sell a famous dish in the city.
>> When I go to a new city, I choose the restaurant that sells a famous dish in the city.
I enjoy to eat the traditional, special or famous food that region.
>> I enjoy eating the traditional, special, or famous food of that region.
I am not picky about food.
>> Correct
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