How to commute, how to use time
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Good afternoon Mr. [Name]^^
Wow, this is a detailed essay of your routine while on your way to work!
I also love reading or listening to music while I\'m on my way to work.
I think it\'s a productive way to use your time.
Everyday I leave my home 7:15, to take a taxi for Subway station.
>>I get out of my house at 7:15 every day and take a taxi to the subway station.
In subway, I read my IPAD, which is eventually part of myself, now runing out its battery for my every day sticking to it.
>>I read using my iPad which has been part of my daily routine and now it\'s running out of juice because I often use it.
Anyway, it help me to get political information via twitter, new tech such as AI learnig via youtube, most important part of reason why I used it is learnig a foreign language.
>>Anyway, it helps me get political information through Twitter, it allows me to learn new technologies like artificial intelligence through YouTube, and the most important thing is I am using it to learn a foreign language.
For my early stage of learnig, we don’t have any effective learnig tool likewise except casette tape,
>>In my early learning phase, there are no effective learning tools other than cassette tapes.
Now, we have many kinds of material for learnig a foreign language.
>>Now, we have many kinds of material in learning a foreign language.
So I think there is no excuse for us not to speak foreign language they want to learn.
>>So I think there is no excuse for us not to speak the foreign language we want to learn.
Not able to use foreign langiage means we do not make an effort to learn as much as it needs to.
>>Being unable to use a foreign language means that we are not trying to learn as much as we need to.
And finally I arrive at my office 8:25.
>>CORRECT!
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