How to cope with cabin fever.

2020-08-10 · 첨삭 강사 Gabby

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At the first, I did something like completing puzzle, painting a picture, and cooking for killing time. But soon, I thought that it was waste of the time and wanted to do something productive. So I started home training and taking online English class. Although these are not enough for overcome cabin fever fully, I feel better now. And I believe that I could go out soon.

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Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing.
-T.Gabby :)
At the first, I did something like completing puzzle, painting a picture, and cooking for killing time. 
>> At the first, I did something like completing puzzle, painting a picture, and cooking to kill time. 
But soon, I thought that it was waste of the time and wanted to do something productive. 
>> But soon, I thought that it was just a waste of the time and I wanted to do something more productive. 
So I started home training and taking online English class. 
>> So I started home training and taking online English classes.
Although these are not enough for overcome cabin fever fully, I feel better now. 
>> Correct.
And I believe that I could go out soon.
>> And I believe that I can go out soon.

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