How to deal with stress
학생이 쓴 원문
The positive ways
It`s better not to be alone if possible.
Which make them feel more depressed
It`s much better to go out and change the environment.
I think it would be nice if someone could stay with them and go out with them.
The negative ways
Some blame themselves or blame others
Or some people use violence.
As a result. they will spoil themselves.
The answer is not to blame or use violence, It is not good for mental health.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name]! Thank you for doing your homework. A job well done. Keep up the good work. See you later in class.
Here are your corrections:
It`s better not to be alone if possible.
>> CORRECT
>> Being alone make them feel more depressed.
>> CORRECT
>>CORRECT
The negative ways:
Some blame themselves or blame others
Or some people use violence.
As a result. they will spoil themselves.
The answer is not to blame or use violence, It is not good for mental health.
>> Some people blame themselves or blame others while some use violence.
>> CORRECT
>> Blame and violence are not the answer because it will not be good for the mental health.
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