how to eat

2020-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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In the not -too- distance future the robot will cook. Or the pill will replace the meal. Anything is welcome. The paper says that fewer time women spend in the kitchen The economy is picking up. Sometimes we cook like we use to. But it will be an event. I look forward to seeing people freed from the kitchen to participate in better activities

강사 첨삭

Good day Mrs. [Name]! Thank you for doing your homework. Keep up the good work. 

Here are your corrections:

In the not -too- distance future the robot will cook.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> In the not-too-distant future robots will cook.

Or the pill will replace the meal.
>> Maybe, pills will replace a meal.

Anything is welcome.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> Anything is possible.

The paper says that fewer time women spend in the kitchen
>> A paper says that women spend fewer time in the kitchen.

The economy is picking up.
>> CORRECT

Sometimes we cook like we use to.
>> ... used to..

But it will be an event.
>> CORRECT

I look forward to seeing people freed from the kitchen to participate in better activities
>> ..free.. 

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