How to get a boyfriend.

Hi!

You are a very intelligent student and I can see that you want to improve your fullest capability in learning the English language. Keep your ideas flowing.

Here are my corrections for you!

Let me ask some questions.

>> Correct

Do you have a boyfriend?

>> Correct

Who confessed?

>>[Do you mean?] Who confessed his feelings for you?

How do I get a boyfriend like you do?

>> Correct

OR >> How to have a boyfriend like you do?

Do you know that? I think my topic is the most difficult topic.

>> Do you know  that this topic is the most difficult one?

When I searched for Naver 지식　In, I was really shocked.

>> When I searched Naver.com, I was really shocked.

There are many girls who asked how to get a boyfriend.

>> I found out that there are a lot of girls who are asking about, how to have/get a boyfriend?

Most of them are elementary school students.

>> Correct

Thus, I didn`t get any answer.

>> Correct

Then I asked this question to my friends who have a boyfriend.

>> Then I asked this question to my friends who have boyfriends.

Whenever I asked how to get a boyfriend, they are making fun of me. 

>>  Whenever I asked how to have a boyfriend, they would laugh at me. 

Actually, most said that pretty faces are preperations.

>> Actually, most of them said that a girl who has a pretty face is their preference.

I feel bad.

>> Correct

If pretty faces are preperations, I can not do it. 

>> If having a pretty face is their preference, I can not do it. 
So I tried to recall my experience.

>> So I tried to recall my personal experiences.

I know you think I`m crazy.

>> Correct

Today I `m going to tell how to get a boyfriend w th 윤 두준. 

>>[Do you mean] Today I am going to tell you how to have a boyfriend.

First, I have to go to good university.

>> First, I have to go to a good University.

Or>> First, I have to study in a good University.

Because when I have to say my university, I don`t want to feel embarrassed.

>> Just in case they want to know what University I am attending, I don`t want to feel embarrassed.

In onder to go to a good university, I will study hard at high school and continue to develop myself while thinking about Yoon doo jun.

>> In order to enter a good University, I will study hard and continue to develop myself while thinking about Yoon doo jun.