How to get a boyfriend2
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Hello! Happy Thursday!
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it..
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great. ^_^
Here are my corrections for you:
After that, I have to go to the student council.
>>CORRECT
So I need to maintain a good image during my university life.
>>CORRECT
If I don`t have any status, it will be too burdensome for him so I have to use my student council status naturally.
>>DID YOU MEAN: If I don\'t have any status, it will be a burden for him. So I have to use my student council status naturally.
And I let the students council members like Highlight.
>> DID YOU MEAN: And make the student council members to be the \"Highlight\".
Then I can invite them for celebrating our School Festival.
>>Then I can invite them to celebrate our school festival.
I think most students don\'t oppose. Because Highlight is the best.
>> I think most students will not oppose because the Highlight is the best.
Third, I will go to the waiting room thanks to student council.
>> Third, I will go to the waiting room. Thanks to the student council.
Actually this idea is from the book that we called ‘Fanfic’ in Korea.
>> Actually, this idea came from the book that we called ‘Fanfic’ in Korea.
In that book, the main girl character and doo jun know each other because of that.
>>CORRECT
Although it was a fiction I was really envy of it.
>>Although it was a fiction, I was really envious about it.
Fourth, I will talk with him a lot.
>> Fourth, I will talk to him a lot.
This step is necessary.
>>CORRECT
I know many things about him but he don`t.
>> DID YOU MEAN: I know many things about him but he doesn\'t really know me.
I know that his ideal is a small and cute girl.
>> I know that his ideal girl is small and cute.
That makes me sad.
>>CORRECT
However, I try to make him know me.
>> However, I\'ll try to make him know me.
Fifth, I send a direct message in Instagram and keep contact with him.
>> Fifth, I\'ll send a direct message on Instagram and keep contact with him.
At the end he and I will be dating.
>>CORRECT
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