How to get avoid of sick
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We can avoid sick in warm or cool places.
Second, we can avoid sick by washing were bodies.
Third, we can avoid sick to not getting out of the house.
Lastly, we can get avoid of sick by wearing a mask.
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~ T. CamilleWe can avoid sick in warm or cool places.
>> We can avoid getting sick when we are in warm or cool places.
Second, we can avoid sick by washing were bodies.
Second, we can avoid sick by washing were bodies.
>> Second, we can avoid getting sick by washing our bodies.
Third, we can avoid sick to not getting out of the house.
>> Third, we can avoid getting sick by not leaving our houses.
Lastly, we can get avoid of sick by wearing a mask.
Lastly, we can get avoid of sick by wearing a mask.
>> Lastly, we can avoid getting sick by wearing masks.
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