How to get back to work after a long holiday :(
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello there!
It is a first day to get back to work after a long holiday. It seemed like such a long holiday, but the time passes so quickly like an arrow. I am looking at the monitor as usual in the office.:( I have an interesting news. My mom had my fortune told by a fortune teller(It is a Korean culture that pepole have read their fortune for the new year)
I will meet my lover it is a good news but, I will meet her after one year.:( What am I supposed to do? I should wait her until next year or try to meet another girls.
Anyway, Life is a fun!! Everything is happended we have never thought!!
Wake up! I think you are still sleeping.:)
[이름].
There are some answers above you gave me.
Answer in number 1 is B, number 2 is A, number 3 is C.
강사 첨삭
Hey, guess what?
I\'m NOT sleeping! Lol!
I came to work so early today.
I was here 1 p.m. in the afternoon and my work starts at 6.
I am very sad today.
I keep on thinking about myself and my family.
I want to be able to help them in all the expenses at home.
I want to continue sending my brother to school,
I want to pay the bills instead of my father paying them,
and I don\'t want my mother to work anymore.
How would life be if I made no mistakes?
I keep on thinking too much.
How are you?
Ofcourse I think you should go and meet some girls.
How would you find your lover if you would not look for her? :)
Go!
It will be an awesome experience! :)
Here are your corrections.
--T. WENDY ^^
Hello there!>>CorrectIt is a first day to get back to work after a long holiday.
>>Correct
It seemed like such a long holiday, but the time passes so quickly like an arrow.
>> It seemed like such a long holiday, but time passes so quickly like an arrow.
I am looking at the monitor as usual in the office.:(
>>Correct
I have an interesting news.
>>Correct
My mom had my fortune told by a fortune teller
>>Correct
(It is a Korean culture that pepole have read their fortune for the new year)>>It\'s part of the Korean culture that people read their fortune during new year.
I will meet my lover it is a good news but, I will meet her after one year.:(
>>Correct
What am I supposed to do?
>>Correct
I should wait her until next year or try to meet another girls. >> I should wait for her until next year or try to meet other girls.
Anyway, Life is a fun!!
>>Correct
Everything is happended we have never thought!! >>Everything we never thought would happen had happened.Wake up!
>>Correct
I think you are still sleeping.:) >>Correct
[이름].>>CorrectThere are some answers above you gave me.
>>These are the answers for the questions you gave me.Answer in number 1 is B,
>>Correct
number 2 is A,
>>Correct
number 3 is C.
>>A
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