How to get back to work after a long holiday :(

2013-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

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Hello there! It is a first day to get back to work after a long holiday. It seemed like such a long holiday, but the time passes so quickly like an arrow. I am looking at the monitor as usual in the office.:( I have an interesting news. My mom had my fortune told by a fortune teller(It is a Korean culture that pepole have read their fortune for the new year) I will meet my lover it is a good news but, I will meet her after one year.:( What am I supposed to do? I should wait her until next year or try to meet another girls. Anyway, Life is a fun!! Everything is happended we have never thought!! Wake up! I think you are still sleeping.:) [이름]. There are some answers above you gave me. Answer in number 1 is B, number 2 is A, number 3 is C.

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Hey, guess what? I\'m NOT sleeping! Lol! I came to work so early today. I was here 1 p.m. in the afternoon and my work starts at 6. I am very sad today. I keep on thinking about myself and my family. I want to be able to help them in all the expenses at home. I want to continue sending my brother to school, I want to pay the bills instead of my father paying them, and I don\'t want my mother to work anymore. How would life be if I made no mistakes? I keep on thinking too much. How are you? Ofcourse I think you should go and meet some girls. How would you find your lover if you would not look for her? :) Go! It will be an awesome experience! :) Here are your corrections. --T. WENDY ^^ Hello there!>>CorrectIt is a first day to get back to work after a long holiday. >>Correct It seemed like such a long holiday, but the time passes so quickly like an arrow. >> It seemed like such a long holiday, but time passes so quickly like an arrow. I am looking at the monitor as usual in the office.:( >>Correct I have an interesting news. >>Correct My mom had my fortune told by a fortune teller >>Correct (It is a Korean culture that pepole have read their fortune for the new year)>>It\'s part of the Korean culture that people read their fortune during new year. I will meet my lover it is a good news but, I will meet her after one year.:( >>Correct What am I supposed to do? >>Correct I should wait her until next year or try to meet another girls. >> I should wait for her until next year or try to meet other girls. Anyway, Life is a fun!! >>Correct Everything is happended we have never thought!! >>Everything we never thought would happen had happened.Wake up! >>Correct I think you are still sleeping.:) >>Correct [이름].>>CorrectThere are some answers above you gave me. >>These are the answers for the questions you gave me.Answer in number 1 is B, >>Correct number 2 is A, >>Correct number 3 is C. >>A  

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