how to get to my place 2

The express train name is ITX, and this itx starts from Yong-san station and Cheong-nyang-ni station. And your destination is “Nam-chun-cheon Station”. This itx usually starts every 30 minutes at those stations, if my memory is still working (by the way, I start to be doubtful of my brain). Just go one of those stations, and ask to someone, look like smart or pretty, that “where can you buy a ticket for itx?” (This is one of my favorite things that asking to stranger at new places.) You can buy the ticket for itx at the ticket office or a ticket machine. Don’t worry. There are English version and Japanese Version. And, enjoy the landscape while you are on the way to my place. Just don’t forget your destination “Nam-chun-cheon Station”. And please inform me before starting from your starting place then I’ll be there in time.

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-T. Ritchel-

The express train name is ITX, and this itx starts from Yong-san station and Cheong-nyang-ni station.

>> The express train's name is ITX, and this itx starts from Yong-san station to Cheong-nyang-ni station.

And your destination is “Nam-chun-cheon Station”.

>> Your destination is “Nam-chun-cheon Station”.

 This itx usually starts every 30 minutes at those stations, if my memory is still working (by the way, I start to be doubtful of my brain).

>>This itx usually travels every 30 minutes at those stations (if my memory is still working). I have been doubtful about my memory.

 Just go one of those stations, and ask to someone, look like smart or pretty, that “where can you buy a ticket for itx?” (This is one of my favorite things that asking to stranger at new places.)

>> Just go to one of those stations, and ask someone (look like smart and pretty) where you can buy tickets. (Asking a stranger is one of my favorite actions.)

You can buy the ticket for itx at the ticket office or a ticket machine.

>> Correct.

 Don’t worry.

>> Correct.

>> You don't have to worry.

There are English version and Japanese Version.

>> There are English and Japanese translations.

 And, enjoy the landscape while you are on the way to my place.

>> You can enjoy the sceneries as you head to my place.

 Just don’t forget your destination “Nam-chun-cheon Station”.

>> Just don’t forget your destination: “Nam-chun-cheon Station”.

 And please inform me before starting from your starting place then I’ll be there in time.

>> Just inform me upon leaving, so I could meet you at the station on time.