How to Good sleep
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Ara!
Good morning!
You baby youngest.
May be he is very cute.
Umm...but you are so tired.
I think you must sleep after lunch.
If you sleep 20minutes. You will so very fresh.
Thank you
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강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] No! Thank you or accomplishing your homework and as well for giving a very good advice. Your original text had some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. These adjustments improve the clarity and flow of your message, ensuring it\'s easily understood.
^^ T. Ara
>>> You have a very young baby.
May be he is very cute.
May be he is very cute.
>>> Maybe he is very cute.
Umm...but you are so tired.
Umm...but you are so tired.
>>> Hmm... but you seem very tired.
I think you must sleep after lunch.
I think you must sleep after lunch.
>>> I think you should sleep after lunch.
If you sleep 20minutes. You will so very fresh.
If you sleep 20minutes. You will so very fresh.
>>> If you sleep for 20 minutes, you will feel very refreshed.
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