How to improve a productivity

2017-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I think the best way to improve a productivity is to find aptitude which you suit. But it is not easy to find a suitable aptitude for yourself. Genius is the result of finding good aptitude. Therefore, it is important to have diverse experience when people are young. And it is important to play in the nature. Various experience allow you to identify your own aptitude. Spending a lot of time in nature increase your imagination and creativity through stimulation of sensibility. Nature open the five senses of human. If a person work to suit in aptitude, productivity are very high.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!
Well, it is ideal to pursue what really interest you or whatever God-given talent you have. But then often times in the real world, we have to set aside what we like to do and choose what could be more beneficial to us financially. Sad but true.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I think the best way to improve a productivity is to find aptitude which you suit.
>> I think the best way to improve productivity is to find an aptitude which suits you.
But it is not easy to find a suitable aptitude for yourself.
>> correct!
Genius is the result of finding good aptitude.
>> correct!
Therefore, it is important to have diverse experience when people are young.
>> correct!
And it is important to play in the nature.
>> correct!
Various experience allow you to identify your own aptitude.
>> correct!
Spending a lot of time in nature increase your imagination and creativity through stimulation of sensibility.
>> correct!
Nature open the five senses of human.
>> Nature opens the five senses of humans.
If a person work to suit in aptitude, productivity are very high.
>> If a person works to suit his/her aptitude, productivity is very high.

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