How to love my family.
학생이 쓴 원문
I spend a lot of money on my family.
Especially, I give my parents a lot of allowance.
Moreover, I often send gifts to my sisters and brother.
The kinds of gifts are fruits, ginseng, and cookies.
I really love my nephews and try to be a good aunt for them.
I sometimes try to meet them, talk to them and give advice.
This is how I love my family.
강사 첨삭
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~~ Teacher Sharon
I spend a lot of money on my family.
>> Correct
Especially, I give my parents a lot of allowance.
Especially, I give my parents a lot of allowance.
>> I especially give my parents a big allowance.
Moreover, I often send gifts to my sisters and brother.
Moreover, I often send gifts to my sisters and brother.
>> Correct
The kinds of gifts are fruits, ginseng, and cookies.
The kinds of gifts are fruits, ginseng, and cookies.
>> These gifts often include fruits, ginseng, and cookies.
I really love my nephews and try to be a good aunt for them.
I really love my nephews and try to be a good aunt for them.
>> I really love my nephews and I try to be a good aunt to them.
I sometimes try to meet them, talk to them and give advice.
I sometimes try to meet them, talk to them and give advice.
>> Correct
This is how I love my family.
This is how I love my family.
>> Correct
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