How to make feel happy for visitors.
학생이 쓴 원문
If visitors come my home, I will decorate my home and make them delicious foods to feel welcome.
I will offer something to drink and talk about last days. When they go back, I will give some presents for them to feel happy.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Jenna! It is very nice to hear that you are accommodating to your visitors. That only proves how really good you are as a person. They say, you treat other the way you want them to treat you. I\'ll see you in class. ~ T. Lyn
If visitors come my home, I will decorate my home and make them delicious foods to feel welcome.
>>When visitors or guests come to our house, they will feel welcomed by decorating the house and cooking delicious food.
I will offer something to drink and talk about last days.
I will offer something to drink and talk about last days.
>>I will offer them something to drink and to talk to them about the things happened about the previous times.
When they go back, I will give some presents for them to feel happy.
>>When they return, I will give them presents so they can be happy.
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