How to make pandemics optional.

2020-04-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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It is hard to say that we aren\'t going to face another epidemic in near future for sure, meaning pandemics are inevitable in theory. This is because it is impossible to be aware of every single virus that exists on the earth as well as to predict how the pre-existing viruses will mutate and affect human beings again. However, minimizing presumably devastating impacts that would be caused by future pandemics is feasible, andn we all know how. A number of measures were already given by the experts in terms of public hygiene, but the thing is the capability to follow those protocols varies considerably in accordance with a country\'s overall performance. For example, there are a massive number of people who lack knowledge and equipment regarding how to sanitize surrounding environments, while many others suffer from the lack of political leadership that can lead them to the right direction though they have abundant hygienic materials. So, global cooperation will make pandemics optional.

강사 첨삭

Hi Drexel! You did great with this homework. I appreciate the effort! ^ ^
You made a good point here. But, we should always learn from the past. We are now aware that new strains of viruses may occur in the future, at least preparedness and readiness to respond to such occurrence is crucial.
-Teacher Jedah

It is hard to say that we aren\'t going to face another epidemic in near future for sure, meaning pandemics are inevitable in theory. 
>>CORRECT (*in the near future)
This is because it is impossible to be aware of every single virus that exists on the earth as well as to predict how the pre-existing viruses will mutate and affect human beings again. 
>>CORRECT
However, minimizing presumably devastating impacts that would be caused by future pandemics is feasible, and we all know how. 
>>CORRECT
A number of measures were already given by the experts in terms of public hygiene, but the thing is the capability to follow those protocols varies considerably in accordance with a country\'s overall performance. 
>>CORRECT
For example, there are a massive number of people who lack knowledge and equipment regarding how to sanitize surrounding environments, while many others suffer from the lack of political leadership that can lead them to the right direction though they have abundant hygienic materials. 
>>CORRECT
So, global cooperation will make pandemics optional.
>>CORRECT

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