How to overcome stress
학생이 쓴 원문
Few people are not stressed these days. I also live under stress at work or home. A good way to overcome stress have positive thoughts. Thinking in a good way can help a lot. Past time never comes back. It would be nice to do your best for the day.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [Name]. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me about this topic. ^_^
T. Irene
Few people are not stressed these days.
>>> Just a few are not stressed these days.
I also live under stress at work or home.
>>> I also am stressed from work and at home.
A good way to overcome stress have positive thoughts.
>>> A good way to overcome stress is to have positive thoughts.
Thinking in a good way can help a lot.
>>> Thinking good can help a lot.
Past time never comes back.
>>> It helps drive the past pains away.
It would be nice to do your best for the day.
>>> Correct.
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