How to resolve conflict.
학생이 쓴 원문
Conflict is an inevitable element of life, then dealing with it becomes important. I prefer to take some time and detach myself from the immediate controversy because making a decision while I\'m upset could lead to a more problematic situation. For instance, one can unintentionally offend someone who are now against his or her opinion by saying insulting words, which s/he wouldn\'t have done in non-conflict circumstances. This emotional behavior could provoke another one from the counterpart, worsening the situation, and end up with conflicts of a different kind. Therefore, I believe that keeping oneself apart from trouble is the best way to handle it since distancing actually provide an opportunity to reflect on the problem. This reflection is crucial, considering conflict involves more than two individuals who disagree with each other, because it triggers mutual understanding. By doing so, people are able to compromise with others\' different opinion and come up with better solutions.
강사 첨삭
Hi Drexel! Thank you so much for your thoughts here. I appreciate the effort you have invested in it. ^ ^
To sum up your statement; you prefer to distance yourself in a conflict to give you a better judgement of the situation rather than drawing the battle lines. I agree with you. ^ ^
I just don\'t understand the flow of your 6th sentence. Maybe we can discuss this further in class. ^ ^ Thank you!
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT
I prefer to take some time and detach myself from the immediate controversy because making a decision while I\'m upset could lead to a more problematic situation.
>>CORRECT
For instance, one can unintentionally offend someone who are now against his or her opinion by saying insulting words, which s/he wouldn\'t have done in non-conflict circumstances.
>>For instance, one can unintentionally offend someone who is now against his or her opinion by saying insulting words, which s/he wouldn\'t have done in non-conflict circumstances.
This emotional behavior could provoke another one from the counterpart, worsening the situation, and end up with conflicts of a different kind.
>>This emotional behavior could provoke the opposing side, worsening the situation, and may lead to a different kind and level of conflict.
Therefore, I believe that keeping oneself apart from trouble is the best way to handle it since distancing actually provide an opportunity to reflect on the problem.
>>CORRECT (...actually provides)
This reflection is crucial, considering conflict involves more than two individuals who disagree with each other, because it triggers mutual understanding.
>>( I don\'t quite understand the flow of this statement. )
By doing so, people are able to compromise with others\' different opinion and come up with better solutions.
>>By doing so, people with opposing ideas and opinions can meet half way and may be able to come up with solutions resolving the issue.
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