how to restrict consumpton in public area

first, i'll install camera around all of the public area. second, order police officer to wathch carefully and when they saw the consumption of liquor in public area, do punishment like bring them to prison or warn them very hardly. third, advertise in televisin or in the internet that the consumption of liquor in public area is strictly prohibited

Hi! You did a good job writing this compostion! Check out my corrections: - T. May -   how to restrict consumpton in public area >> How to avoid consumption of liquors in public areas first, i'll install camera around all of the public area. >> first, i will install cameras/camera in public areas. second, order police officer to wathch carefully and when they saw third, advertise in televisin or in the internet that the consumption of liquor in public area is strictly prohibited  >>secondly, I will order police officers to monitor public places which allow the consumption of liquors. Punishments should be implented like imprisonment or just give warnings to those who will violate the rule/law. >>third, advertise in televisin or in the internet that the consumption of liquor in public area is strictly prohibited  >> Lastly, there should be advertisements about prohibition of liquors in public areas in television and in the internet  about prohibition of liquors in public areas.