How to ride ice skate, a bike and a kickboard.

2016-12-29 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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First I will tell you about the ice skate when I ride ice skate I am always with my friend. When we want to ride it first is right foot and next is left foot. When we want to stop wedon't have brake so we have make a skate like a A shape. Second is riding abike when we ride a bike we hold the handle and go were we want to we stop with a brake. Third is kickboard we hold handle and ride withe yor one feet and when it became fast we ride with two feet and it is really same with bike. Good bye teacher My article is about the twice tzuyu it is 2016/12/29 tue

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Here you go.


All good things,

==Teacher Charlie==



First I will tell you about the ice skate when I ride ice skate I am always with my friend. When we want to ride it first is right foot and next is left foot.
When we want to stop wedon\'t have brake so we have make a skate like a A shape.
Second is riding abike when we ride a bike we hold the handle and go were we want
to we stop with a brake.
Third is kickboard we hold handle and ride withe yor one feet and when it became fast
we ride with two feet and it is really same with bike.
>>  I will first talk about how to skate. To start skating, you start by pushing off with your right foot then your left one. When you want to slow down or stop, you form an A shape with your feet. Whenever I go skating, I\'m always with a friend. Next is how to ride a bike. To ride a bike, hold onto the handle to steer and stop using the brake. The kickboard is similar to riding a bike; you hold onto the handles but you ride it with only one foot although you can use two feet as well.


Good bye teacher My article is about the twice tzuyu it is 2016/12/29 tue

>> Teacher, I would like to discuss the first article dated 12/29/2016  and entitled \"Taiwan-born Tzuyu Chosen As Most Popular K-pop Idol in Taiwan\".

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