How to spend time?

2016-05-17 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

When we were younger, we ran by just looking at the front. We couldn’t afford to look around us psychologically due to our given tasks. We had to work day and night to finish our projects or make presentation materials on time. However, life is short. We need to appreciate what we have and enjoy this moment. We need to get our breath and see what’s happening: flowers bloom in spring, trees and leaves turn deep green in summer, autumn brings us bright and blue sky, and white snow and Christmas carol on the streets in winter. There are too many things that are too precious to miss on our daily lives. It is happiness and joy of life that we wake up in the morning, breathe fresh air, eat breakfast, take a walk in the park, greet our neighbors, and chat with our friends and relatives. Let’s have fun sometimes, forgetting about worries that bug us like competition, promotion, money, etc. Climbing up the social ladder by working hard is important. But don't ruin ourselves only for that.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Sir [이름]! Happy Tuesday. I totally agree with you. ^^ We should appreciate what we have and live our life to the fullest. Have a great day. Teacher Nina   When we were younger, we ran by just looking at the front. >> correct We couldn’t afford to look around us psychologically due to our given tasks. >> correct We had to work day and night to finish our projects or make presentation materials on time. >> correct However, life is short. >> correct We need to appreciate what we have and enjoy this moment. >> correct We need to get our breath and see what’s happening: flowers bloom in spring, trees and leaves turn deep green in summer, autumn brings us bright and blue sky, and white snow and Christmas carol on the streets in winter. >> correct There are too many things that are too precious to miss on our daily lives. >> correct It is happiness and joy of life that we wake up in the morning, breathe fresh air, eat breakfast, take a walk in the park, greet our neighbors, and chat with our friends and relatives. >> correct Let’s have fun sometimes, forgetting about worries that bug us like competition, promotion, money, etc. >> correct Climbing up the social ladder by working hard is important. >> correct But don\'t ruin ourselves only for that. >> correct

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