How to spend times with your friends(OPIC test)

Let me tell you how can I keep in touch and spend time with my girl friend normally. I live in the place far from my girl friend's house. So whenever I have some time off I try to talk on the phone with my girl friends on week days. And on weekend I usually go to my hometown where she lives, and spend time with her. My girl friends and I love sports. When I meet her, we usually do the various exercise like jogging, hiking etc. Recently, We started to learn jazz dance together. when we work out together,I feel strong bonding with her And It refreshs me a lot and give me the energy that last for the next weekday.

Hi Michelle!!! I appreciate that you found time to make a composition. I hope you do this regularly. This is a good way to practice grammar and correct usage. See you in our next class. Have a great day!^^   Let me tell you how can I keep in touch and spend time with my girl friend normally. >>Let me tell you how I keep in touch and spend time with my girlfriend normally. I live in the place far from my girl friend's house. >>I live in a place far from my girlfriend’s house. So whenever I have some time off I try to talk on the phone with my girl friends on week days. >>So whenever I have some time off (on week days), I try to talk on the phone with my girlfriend. And on weekend, I usually go to my hometown where she lives, and spend time with her. >>CORRECTMy girl friends and I love sports. >>My girlfriend and I love sports. When I meet her, we usually do the various exercise like jogging, hiking etc. >>When we meet, we usually do various forms of exercise like jogging, hiking, etc. Recently, we started to learn jazz dance together. >>CORRECT when we work out together,I feel strong bonding with her >>When we work out together, I feel close to her. >>When we work out together, I feel our strong bond as a couple. And It refreshs me a lot and give me the energy that last for the next weekday. >>And it refreshes me a lot and gives me the energy that lasts until the next weekday.