how to write E-mail

2010-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear. Ms. [Name]~ It's a happy Sunday~ How was your weekend~ Ihave some qustion Our company used to use E-mail for a work So Iwant know how to can write E-mail well. As you know I'm working in finance department of BEHR KOREA. And I'm Master AP (Account Payable) of finance. when I recieved Overseas and locals invoices I have to enter detail of invoices in the SAP program. Importance of this problem became clear in the process of that working. So I will write letter or E-mail everyday to you about composition to frequently use for working Can you help me? dear Ms. [Name]. I'm looking forward your answer. Have a nice weekend and see you tomorrow!!! Bye!Bye!!

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Hello, my dear BELLA! I’m happy to read your composition.Writing an email is the same as writing a composition... You have to have some kind of greetings first then afterwards you can now proceed to the main topic of your email.. Just be open with what you wanna say on your email,okay my dear?;) If you want you can send me a sample email because sometimes, it also depends on the letter on how to reply or response them.. Anyway, Yes, I had a great weekend. Thank you for asking. You are very much welcome to write a composition every day. I am very much willing to help you. I’ll talk with you later! It’s me, Camille Dear. Ms. [Name] >>>okay >>>Ms. [Name] (please check correct punctuation and correct spelling)Hello~ It's a happy Sunday~ >>>Hello! It’s a happy Sunday today!How was your weekend~ >>>okay but observe correct punctuation >>>How was your weekend?Ihave some qustion >>>I have some question.Our company used to use E-mail for a work >>>Our company is used to be using E-mail for work.So Iwant know how to can write E-mail well. >>>So, I want to know how to write a good E-mail.As you know I'm working in finance department of BEHR KOREA. >>>As you know, I’m working at the Finance Department of BEHR, Korea.And I'm Master AP (Account Payable) of finance. >>>I am a professional AP of finance.when I recieved Overseas and locals invoices I have to enter detail of invoices in the SAP program.>>>I am responsible in receiving Overseas and Local invoices and also to enter details of invoices in the SAP program.Importance of this problem became clear in the process of that working.>>>It needs careful assessment and inputting of correct data are the important things to consider in my job. So I will write letter or E-mail everyday to you about compositionto frequently use for working >>>So, I will write a letter or create a composition everyday to practice.Can you help me? dear Ms. [Name].Can you help me, Ms. [Name]?I'm looking forward your answer.I am looking forward to your quick reply.Have a nice weekend and see you tomorrow!!!>>>correctBye!Bye!! >>>correct

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