How traveling helped me to overcome trauma
학생이 쓴 원문
Traveling alone made me feel very nervous but build up my confidence on myself. I could focus on myself and understand my fears. And I concluded that what I was afraid of was not being alone but the thief. Through the experience that I got help from some strangers, I felt safe among strangers. At that moment I had the accident,I was afraid of strange people. But while traveling, my fear was gradually disappearing. Naturally I overcame my trauma slowly. After traveling,I gained my confidence.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
It\'s nice to know that traveling helped you overcome your trauma and it\'s nice that you were able to build your confidence again.
- T. Caitlyn
Traveling alone made me feel very nervous but build up my confidence on myself.
>> Traveling alone made me feel very nervous but helped build my confidence.
I could focus on myself and understand my fears.
>> CORRECT
And I concluded that what I was afraid of was not being alone but the thief.
>> I concluded that what I was afraid of wasn\'t being alone, but rather, the thief.
Through the experience that I got help from some strangers, I felt safe among strangers.
>> CORRECT
At that moment I had the accident, I was afraid of strange people.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: At the moment of the accident, I was afraid of unfamiliar/strange people.
But while traveling, my fear was gradually disappearing.
>> CORRECT
Naturally, I overcame my trauma slowly.
>> CORRECT
After traveling, I gained my confidence.
>> CORRECT
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