How was my fishing
학생이 쓴 원문
The fishing was not good. I couldn\'t catch many squid. I got only 2 squids. They were the same as my fishing boat members. I think the captain was not exported. However When I was back home I cooked sashimi and drank a bottle of soup
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Thomas!
Two squids is not that bad. Zero squid is. Maybe, you should have aimed for other kinds of fish aside from the squid. Anyway, the sea is so vast so, I guess, it is not the captain\'s fault.
Well, probably, there have been so many people who have gone fishing in the past few days.
I guess you still had a great time after a long day of fishing.
Thus, read my suggestions below. Great job on your correct sentences on your homework!
See you tomorrow.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
I couldn\'t catch many squid. I got only 2 squids.
>> Correct!!
Or: two squids
They were the same as my fishing boat members.
>> Correct!
I think the captain was not exported.
>> I think the captain was not an expert.
However When I was back home I cooked sashimi and drank a bottle of soup
>> Correct!
Or: However when I was back home I cooked sashimi and drank a bottle of soup.
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