How was today?

2011-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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I had a drinking and talk time with my company people. We talk about complain to company. I was two month 10days since entry this company. I was known early bad point of company. but I decided I think points og learning. How was your today? and I did homework. 1. [What] do you want to eat? Pasta and cheese. 2. [What] do they smoke? Cigarettes. 3. [What] does John drive? Cars. 4. [When] do we get up? Early in the morning. 5. [Where] does that girl go swimming? At the club.

강사 첨삭

Hello Susan! Great job with the homework. I will give you more exercise to help you in your writing skills and speaking skills. I am happy that you are learning something from me. We ned to enhance your writing skills in this composition. Continue writing me so that we will see your progress. Well, I was fine yesterday because it was a holiday in the Philippines it's called Mary Immaculate's birthday.But the Catholic's usually celebrate them. There were no classes yesterday. I was just at home resting. It was fun. I was hoping to see you today but you cancelled class. I hope you will have a great weekend. See you on Monday! T.Faye  Here are your corrections: I had a drinking and talk time with my company people. >>I had a few drinks and talked with my co-workers.We talk about complain to company. >>We talked about our complains for the company.I was two month 10days since entry this company. >>It was two months and 10 days since I entered the company.I was known early bad point of company. >>I was known as a bad point of the company.but I decided I think points og learning. >>But I decided to think points of learning.How was your today?>>How was your day today?and I did homework.>>Correct!1. [What] do you want to eat? Pasta and cheese. >>Correct! 2. [What] do they smoke? Cigarettes. >>Correct! 3. [What] does John drive? Cars. >>Correct! 4. [When] do we get up? Early in the morning. >>Correct! 5. [Where] does that girl go swimming? At the club. >>Correct!

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