How was your chirstmas?
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Jane How was your christmas?
I had a good time with my boyfriend :) On Christmas eve, We watched the movie titled 'about time' which was made by the director of "love actually". Do you know those movies? Maybe you know 'love actaully' at least. 'About time' was so romantic and It made me think of our lives and love. After watching it, we had dinner with cake and wine in a restaurant and then we gave the presents each other.
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
1. Wow, this carpet is worn out. Too many people have walked on it.
2. The kitchen sink is blocked and the water won't go down the drain.
3. I think this pipe is rusty. See this red powdery stuff?
4. This room is draughty. Where's the cold air coming from?
5. Look at the garage wall. The paint is peeling and it looks awful.
6. Our electricity supply has been unreliable because of the recent storms.
7. I think there's a problem with your doorbell. It doesn't ring.
8. I can't stand it when a tap drips. It's such an annoying sound.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition. Wow! That was such a romantic Christmas date! I also had a wonderful celebration with my family. We prepared delicious foods and we had an enjoyable time drinking wine as well. Anyway, I know the movie entitled \"Love Actually\". I watched it a long time ago that I ca barely remember it. I just remember Hugh Grant because he\'s one of my favorite actors. Well, I am curious what present you received from your boyfriend and what present you gave him. Take care and see you in class!
T. JanE ^^
Hi Jane
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How was your Christmas?>> Correct
I had a good time with my boyfriend :)
>> Correct
On Christmas eve, we watched the movie titled \'About Time\' which was made by the director of \"Love Actually\".
>> Correct
Do you know those movies?
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Maybe you know \'Love Actually\' at least. >> Correct
\'About Time\' was so romantic and it made me think of our lives and love.
>> Correct
After watching it, we had dinner with cake and wine in a restaurant and then we gave the presents each other. >> After watching it, we had dinner with cake and wine in a restaurant and then we gave our presents for each other.
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:1. Wow, this carpet is worn out. Too many people have walked on it.>> Correct
2. The kitchen sink is blocked and the water won\'t go down the drain.>> Correct
3. I think this pipe is rusty. See this red powdery stuff?>> Correct
4. This room is draughty. Where\'s the cold air coming from?>> Correct
5. Look at the garage wall. The paint is peeling and it looks awful.>> Correct
6. Our electricity supply has been unreliable because of the recent storms.>> Correct
7. I think there\'s a problem with your doorbell. It doesn\'t ring.>> Correct
8. I can\'t stand it when a tap drips. It\'s such an annoying sound.
>> Correct
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