How was your first driving experience?

2018-06-28 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

학생이 쓴 원문

음.. I got a driver's license when I was in third grade in the university. -at the age of 22 I fell five times in Practice test. 에고ㅠㅠ When I drived a car by myself, I was sweating and I was too scared. I am still scared now. I don't like driving now. If Teacher will have a chance, I hope you must get a driver's license.

강사 첨삭

I got a driver\'s license when I was in third grade in the university.
-at the age of 22
>> CORRECT

I fell five times in Practice test. 에고ㅠㅠ

>> I failed five times during my Practice test.



When I drived a car by myself, I was sweating and I was too scared.

>> I sweat a lot and I feel scared whenever I drive alone.

 I am still scared now.

>> CORRECT


 I don\'t like driving now.

>> CORRECT



 If Teacher will have a chance, I hope you must get a driver\'s license.

>> If you will have a chance, I hope you can get a driver\'s license.



kkkkkk I will soon ^^ I just don\'t have the time these days :(

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