How was your meeting today? Answer in a few sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m in Daegu city now after on business trip.
I went to Seoul city after a long time because I was pretty busy for my moving a office and my new projects.
I met a friend who is really close with me during my business trip. So I was so happy that I was able to talk with my friend in person.^^
강사 첨삭
Hello Benjamin! I am so happy to see you again here on the composition page!
Thank you for sharing your experiences with your business trip last time. I think that staying busy suits you well. Also, getting the chance to meet your friend is such a relaxing experience in spite of your busy schedule. I hope that all of your business interactions yield the best results.
Kindly go over a few of my suggestions below. There are only a few.
See you again in class!
-T. Donna =)
>> I\'m in Daegu city now after a business trip.
I went to Seoul city after a long time because I was pretty busy for my moving a office and my new projects.
I went to Seoul city after a long time because I was pretty busy for my moving a office and my new projects.
>> I went to Seoul city after a long time because I was pretty busy moving to my new office and my new projects.
I met a friend who is really close with me during my business trip. So I was so happy that I was able to talk with my friend in person.
>> Correct!
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