How was your most recent trip?
학생이 쓴 원문
Last year, Went to the Hong kong with my family is my recent trip.
When i was in Hongkong, The weather was very nice. During trip, There was no rainy.
In Hongkong, Every Price was very expensive, I think food price is double about Korea.
Next month, My wife and me will go to the Japan for trip.
Traveling to Japan is first time to me, So i am very exciting.
My favorite Food is Japanese food, So my plan is eating many Japanese food in the trip.
강사 첨삭
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Last year, Went to the Hong kong with my family is my recent trip.
>> Last year, I went to Hong Kong with my family on my recent trip.
When i was in Hongkong, The weather was very nice. During trip, There was no rainy.
>> When I was in Hong Kong, the weather was very nice. During the trip, there was no rain.
In Hongkong, Every Price was very expensive, I think food price is double about Korea.
>> In Hong Kong, everything was very expensive. I think food prices are double those in Korea.
Next month, My wife and me will go to the Japan for trip.
>> Next month, my wife and I will go to Japan for a trip.
Traveling to Japan is first time to me, So i am very exciting.
>> Traveling to Japan is my first time, so it is very exciting.
My favorite Food is Japanese food, So my plan is eating many Japanese food in the trip.
>> My favorite food is Japanese food, so my plan is to eat many Japanese foods on the trip.
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