how was your today?

2011-09-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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my first day of class. i received the question 'how was your today?'. but i didn't an answer. because i've feeled a nervous. so i try again. today is so busy, but if a little bit of anytime, i try to remember the english words. i studyed english for 'good mornig pops' in everymorning. that is radio program. everyday listen to english bordcast. the program is 'good morning pops' program cordinator is 이근철 & john ballentins. my first aim is mastery expressd in the 'good morning pops' . the second goal os Ritcheal. just you. when i first day of class, i pleasure nice to meet you too. but i was panic.because i didin't talk to you very well. but i'm glad. there is great teacher to me. i truly trust you and me.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Thank you for your composition today. Please be guided by the corrections provided below. my first day of class. i received the question 'how was your today?'. >> On my first day of class, I was asked "How was your day today?"but i didn't an answer. because i've feeled a nervous. so i try again.>> I didn't answer because I felt nervous, so I want to try it again.today is so busy, but if a little bit of anytime, i try to remember the english words. i studyed english for 'good mornig pops' in everymorning. that is radio program.>> I am so busy today, but I try to remember English words if I have time. I study English every morning by listening to a radio program known as "Good Morning Pops."everyday listen to english bordcast. the program is 'good morning pops' program cordinator is 이근철 & john ballentins.>> Everyday, I listen to English broadcast. The program coordinator of "Good Morning Pops" is 이근철 and John ballentins.my first aim is mastery expressd in the 'good morning pops' . >> My first aim is to master the expressions in "Good Morning Pops."the second goal os Ritcheal. just you.>> My second goal is my class with you, Ritchel.when i first day of class, i pleasure nice to meet you too. >> It was a pleasure meeting you on the first day of class.but i was panic.because i didin't talk to you very well. but i'm glad. >> I panicked because I didn't talk to you very well. But now I'm glad.there is great teacher to me. i truly trust you and me. >> You are a great teacher to me. I trust you to teach me well.  

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