how was your today?
학생이 쓴 원문
my first day of class. i received the question 'how was your today?'.
but i didn't an answer. because i've feeled a nervous. so i try again.
today is so busy, but if a little bit of anytime, i try to remember the english words. i studyed english for 'good mornig pops' in everymorning. that is radio program.
everyday listen to english bordcast. the program is 'good morning pops' program cordinator is 이근철 & john ballentins.
my first aim is mastery expressd in the 'good morning pops' .
the second goal os Ritcheal. just you.
when i first day of class, i pleasure nice to meet you too.
but i was panic.because i didin't talk to you very well. but i'm glad.
there is great teacher to me. i truly trust you and me.
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my first day of class. i received the question 'how was your today?'.
>> On my first day of class, I was asked "How was your day today?"but i didn't an answer. because i've feeled a nervous. so i try again.>> I didn't answer because I felt nervous, so I want to try it again.today is so busy, but if a little bit of anytime, i try to remember the english words. i studyed english for 'good mornig pops' in everymorning. that is radio program.>> I am so busy today, but I try to remember English words if I have time. I study English every morning by listening to a radio program known as "Good Morning Pops."everyday listen to english bordcast. the program is 'good morning pops' program cordinator is 이근철 & john ballentins.>> Everyday, I listen to English broadcast. The program coordinator of "Good Morning Pops" is 이근철 and John ballentins.my first aim is mastery expressd in the 'good morning pops' .
>> My first aim is to master the expressions in "Good Morning Pops."the second goal os Ritcheal. just you.>> My second goal is my class with you, Ritchel.when i first day of class, i pleasure nice to meet you too.
>> It was a pleasure meeting you on the first day of class.but i was panic.because i didin't talk to you very well. but i'm glad.
>> I panicked because I didn't talk to you very well. But now I'm glad.there is great teacher to me. i truly trust you and me.
>> You are a great teacher to me. I trust you to teach me well.
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