How was your weekend?
학생이 쓴 원문
I went on a date with my husband on weekend.
We enjoyed a delicious korean beef Hanwoo sirloin at a popular restaurant.
The weather was too hot, we could not go outdoor activites, so we went shopping at cool IKEA store.
We looked around a varius furniture and cute decorations.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Jane!
What a lovely weekend you had with your husband! As you mentioned in class, you like outdoor activities. Indeed, window shopping is a relaxing and interesting activity with full blast air conditioning.
I hope that your husband enjoyed the activity as much as you did. Sometimes, men cannot stand women\'s activities for quite a long time. ^^
Below, there are some underlined words for your grammar improvement. Please study them carefully. You did a great job on this homework!
See you soon.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
We enjoyed a delicious korean beef Hanwoo sirloin at a popular restaurant.
>>We enjoyed (the) delicious Korean beef Hanwoo sirloin at a popular restaurant.
The weather was too hot, we could not go outdoor activites, so we went shopping at cool IKEA store.
>> The weather was too hot, we could not go for outdoor activities, so we went shopping at a cool IKEA store.
We looked around a varius furniture and cute decorations.
>> We looked around various furniture and cute decorations.
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