how weekend makes my feel

2023-06-08 · 첨삭 강사 Joy

학생이 쓴 원문

The weekend make me feel freedom from the work. There are a lot of tasks in the office. It is quite pressed me. especially, my job is to take care about my co-workers\'s safety and health. I have to have a sense of responsibility. I hope my people go back to thier home as same as the condition when the way to thier work. And I can enjoy my hobbies such as running, watching movies and hanging out with my friends.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Thomas! Thank you for answering your homework. I\'m excited to see you continue learning and practicing English.

-Teacher Joy

The weekend make me feel freedom from the work.

>> The weekend makes me feel free from work.

There are a lot of tasks in the office. It is quite pressed me.

>> There are a lot of tasks in the office. It quite pressures me.

especially, my job is to take care about my co-workers\'s safety and health.

>> Especially, my job is to take care of my co-workers\' safety and health.

I have to have a sense of responsibility.

>> Correct

I hope my people go back to thier home as same as the condition when the way to thier work.

>> I hope my colleagues go back to their homes in the same condition as when they commute to work.

And I can enjoy my hobbies such as running, watching movies and hanging out with my friends.

>> Moreover, I can enjoy my hobbies such as running, watching movies, and hanging out with my friends.

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