how weekend makes my feel
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The weekend make me feel freedom from the work.
>> The weekend makes me feel free from work.
There are a lot of tasks in the office. It is quite pressed me.
>> There are a lot of tasks in the office. It quite pressures me.
especially, my job is to take care about my co-workers\'s safety and health.
>> Especially, my job is to take care of my co-workers\' safety and health.
I have to have a sense of responsibility.
>> Correct
I hope my people go back to thier home as same as the condition when the way to thier work.
>> I hope my colleagues go back to their homes in the same condition as when they commute to work.
And I can enjoy my hobbies such as running, watching movies and hanging out with my friends.
>> Moreover, I can enjoy my hobbies such as running, watching movies, and hanging out with my friends.
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