How well do you embrace technology in terms of business?
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It is not easy to embrace new technology for people who are old.
>>> Correct!
>>> It is not easy for old people to embrace new technology.
I don\'t think I am old that can not learn something new, but I have been suffering to accept new technology.
>>> I don\'t think I am that old not to learn something new, but I have been suffering to adopt new technology.
>>> OR: I don\'t think I am too old not to learn something new, but I am having a hard time adopting new trends in technology.
It could not be a problem to use a new smartphone for me when I bought a new one.
>> It was not a problem to use a new smartphone for me when I bought a new one.
I could just try what I wanted to.
>> I just tried discovering how to use some applications on my smartphone by myself.
Now, I need to study whenever I buy new good like software and electronics.
>> Now, I need to learn first whenever I buy new electronics devices.
To embrace technology is essential for the business these days.
>> Embracing the use of technology for business is essential these days.
Everybody have to keep studying and should not stop learning it.
>> Everybody has to keep studying and should never stop learning.
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