How well do you embrace technology in terms of business?

2018-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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It is not easy to embrace new technology for people who are old. I don't think I am old that can not learn something new, but I have been suffering to accept new technology. It could not be a problem to use a new smartphone for me when I bought a new one. I could just try what I wanted to. Now, I need to study whenever I buy new good like software and electronics. To embrace technology is essential for the business these days. Everybody have to keep studying and should not stop learning it.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sir [이름]!

Thank you for another composition written by you! There were some minor errors on your composition but I am glad that you have applied the correct form of your infinitives. Way to go! Have a stupendous day!

~Teacher Eunice


It is not easy to embrace new technology for people who are old.

>>> Correct!

>>> It is not easy for old people to embrace new technology.
 I don\'t think I am old that can not learn something new, but I have been suffering to accept new technology.

>>> I don\'t think I am that old not to learn something new, but I have been suffering to adopt new technology.

>>> OR: I don\'t think I am too old not to learn something new, but I am having a hard time adopting new trends in technology.
 It could not be a problem to use a new smartphone for me when I bought a new one.

>> It was not a problem to use a new smartphone for me when I bought a new one.

I could just try what I wanted to.

>> I just tried discovering how to use some applications on my smartphone by myself. 
Now, I need to study whenever I buy new good like software and electronics.

>> Now, I need to learn first whenever I buy new electronics devices.
 To embrace technology is essential for the business these days.

>> Embracing the use of technology for business is essential these days.
 Everybody have to keep studying and should not stop learning it.

>> Everybody has to keep studying and should never stop learning.

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