How were you?
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there Debby :)
Did you have a gread weekend?
This happy weekend is also in the end.It really makes me sad...
This time, I want to ask about "gonna". If there's something I can change with "gonna", tell me what it is. Of course about when I can use, too.
Please see you tommrow.
Be safe. :D
Ah, I'm happy that you told me that I did a gread job! Thank you XD
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I don't absolutely think so. What if we save the money for lottery instead of buying that? We can save a lot of money a few years later. Winning a lottery is the same with being struck by lightning, I guess. If you're thinking to buy a lottery, stop to think about. It is stupid to depend on luck.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!^^
How was you weekend?
Mine was okay!^^
\" Gonna\" is \" going to\" or \" will be\" in formal English.
EXAMPLE:
I\'m gonna be alone this Saturday.
>> I will be alone this Saturday.
>> I\'m going to be alone this Saturday.
Use it for a future action or if you are just planning something that you\'ll do.
EX: I\'m gonna be early for teacher Debby\'s class tomorrow.
>> I will be early tomorrow for my class tomorrow.
Try to practice it.
I will discuss in class later !^^
See you and Take care!^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
Hi there Debby :)>> CORRECT
OR> Hi Debby^^Did you have a gread weekend?
>> CORRECT
Or> How did your weekend go?This happy weekend is also in the end.It really makes me sad...>> CORRECT
OR> This weekend also marks an end so I\'m sad.
This time, I want to ask about \"gonna\". >> CORRECT
Or> I\'d like to ask you about the use of \"gonna\".
If there\'s something I can change with \"gonna\", tell me what it is.
>> CORRECT
>> Please tell me an alternate word for \"gonna\".
Of course about when I can use, too.>> Also of course when I should use it.
Please see you tomorrow.
>> I will see you tomorrow.
Be safe.
>> CORRECT
OR> Be careful.Ah, I\'m happy that you told me that I did a gread job! Thank you XD>> CORRECT
OR> I feel happy that you said I did a good job!^^ Thanks!^^I don\'t absolutely think so.
>> CORRECT
OR> I totally agree!^^
What if we save the money for lottery instead of buying that?
>> CORRECT
OR> It\'s a better idea to save the money instead of buying a ticket.
We can save a lot of money a few years later.
>> CORRECT
OR> We can have more money a few years later.
Winning a lottery is the same with being struck by lightning, I guess.
>> CORRECT
Or> Winning the lottery come once in a blue moon. I think.
If you\'re thinking to buy a lottery, stop to think about.
>> If you\'re thinking about buying a lottery ticket, stop and think about it.
It is stupid to depend on luck.
>> CORRECT
Or> Depending on luck is not wise.
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