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2014-08-04 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Hi there Debby :) Did you have a gread weekend? This happy weekend is also in the end.It really makes me sad... This time, I want to ask about "gonna". If there's something I can change with "gonna", tell me what it is. Of course about when I can use, too. Please see you tommrow. Be safe. :D Ah, I'm happy that you told me that I did a gread job! Thank you XD <Essay> I don't absolutely think so. What if we save the money for lottery instead of buying that? We can save a lot of money a few years later. Winning a lottery is the same with being struck by lightning, I guess. If you're thinking to buy a lottery, stop to think about. It is stupid to depend on luck.

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  Hi there [이름]!^^ How was  you weekend? Mine was okay!^^ \" Gonna\" is \" going to\" or \" will be\" in formal English. EXAMPLE: I\'m gonna be alone this Saturday. >> I will be alone this Saturday. >> I\'m going to be alone this Saturday. Use it for a future action or if you are just planning something that you\'ll do. EX: I\'m gonna be early for teacher Debby\'s class tomorrow. >> I will be early tomorrow for my class tomorrow. Try to practice it. I will discuss in class later !^^ See you and Take care!^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Hi there Debby :)>> CORRECT OR> Hi Debby^^Did you have a gread weekend? >> CORRECT Or> How did your weekend go?This happy weekend is also in the end.It really makes me sad...>> CORRECT OR> This weekend also marks an end so I\'m sad. This time, I want to ask about \"gonna\". >> CORRECT Or> I\'d like to ask you about the use of \"gonna\". If there\'s something I can change with \"gonna\", tell me what it is. >> CORRECT >> Please tell me an alternate word for \"gonna\". Of course about when I can use, too.>> Also of course when I should use it. Please see you tomorrow. >> I will see you tomorrow. Be safe. >> CORRECT OR> Be careful.Ah, I\'m happy that you told me that I did a gread job! Thank you XD>> CORRECT OR> I feel happy that you said I did a good job!^^ Thanks!^^I don\'t absolutely think so. >> CORRECT OR> I totally agree!^^  What if we save the money for lottery instead of buying that? >> CORRECT OR> It\'s a better idea to save the money instead of buying a ticket. We can save a lot of money a few years later. >> CORRECT OR> We can have more money a few years later. Winning a lottery is the same with being struck by lightning, I guess. >> CORRECT Or> Winning the lottery come once in a blue moon. I think. If you\'re thinking to buy a lottery, stop to think about. >> If you\'re thinking about buying a lottery ticket, stop and think about it.  It is stupid to depend on luck. >> CORRECT Or> Depending on luck is not wise.

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