How will computers change in the future?
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I think the boundary which is in each gadgets will become faint.
Smartphone and smart devices will change constantly, and new gadgets will appear like smart watch.
These days, smart phone and tablet can do almost all function of computer.
Now is the generation that all people can carry small computer.
In future, I think, the device\'s form will disappear, and light form will appear instead.
For example, there is light instead of monitor.
Light keyboard was sold now. It is start point of light form device.
Imagine will be real, and something unimaginable will be real too.
When I was young, I used to imagine to carry, play game, search internet with computer.
Now, I carry smartphone, and I can do anything which can with computer.
I wish that the technology develop going ethical and correct directions.
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>>I think the boundary which is in each gadgets will faint.
Smartphone and smart devices will change constantly, and new gadgets will appear like smart watch.
Smartphone and smart devices will change constantly, and new gadgets will appear like smart watch.
>>Smartphones and other devices will change constantly, and new gadgets will appear such as the smart watch.
These days, smart phone and tablet can do almost all function of computer.
These days, smart phone and tablet can do almost all function of computer.
>>These days, the smartphones and tablets have the same functions as the computer.
Now is the generation that all people can carry small computer.
Now is the generation that all people can carry small computer.
>>Now is the generation that all people can carry mini computers.
In future, I think, the device\'s form will disappear, and light form will appear instead.
In future, I think, the device\'s form will disappear, and light form will appear instead.
>>In the future, I think the devices will change their forms to a lighter one.
For example, there is light instead of monitor.
For example, there is light instead of monitor.
>>For instance, the use of notebooks instead of personal computers.
Light keyboard was sold now.
Light keyboard was sold now.
>>A light keyboard is also sold these days.
It is start point of light form device.
>>It is the start of the generation of lighter devices.
Imagine will be real, and something unimaginable will be real too.
Imagine will be real, and something unimaginable will be real too.
>>Imagine what improvements will still happen in the future.
When I was young, I used to imagine to carry, play game, search internet with computer.
When I was young, I used to imagine to carry, play game, search internet with computer.
>>When I was young, I used to imagine carrying a lighter computer, playing a game on it, and searching using the internet.
Now, I carry smartphone, and I can do anything which can with computer.
Now, I carry smartphone, and I can do anything which can with computer.
>>Now, it came true and I can do anything with it the same as the computer.
I wish that the technology develop going ethical and correct directions.
I wish that the technology develop going ethical and correct directions.
>>I wish that technology develops more in a moral and ethical way.
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