How will you achieve your goals?
학생이 쓴 원문
My current goal is to improve my english skills.
I\'m aware that my english skills is not strong.
So, to level up my speaking, i have been participating online interaction class since i applied.
Also, During my vacation, i dedicated many time to study english for vacabulary and grammar.
If i admitted this university, i will take advantage to language support scholarship offered university and keep try to make a qualifications for enroll condition of abroad university.
This is my answer how to achieve my goals.
강사 첨삭
Hello So [이름],
Great job in answering your homework. I hope this will help you answer possible interview questions :)
Great job in answering your homework. I hope this will help you answer possible interview questions :)
My current goal is to improve my English skills.
CORRECT!
OR>>> My primary goal is to enhance my English proficiency.
I\'m aware that my English skills is not strong.
>>> I am aware that my English skills are not yet strong.
So, to level up my speaking, I have been participating online interaction class since I applied.
>>>To improve my speaking skills, I have been participating in online interactive classes since I enrolled.
Also, During my vacation, I dedicated many time to study English for vacabulary and grammar.
>>>Additionally, during my vacation, I dedicated a lot of time to studying English vocabulary and grammar.
If I admitted this university, I will take advantage to language support scholarship offered university and keep try to make a qualifications for enroll condition of abroad university.
>>>If admitted to this university, I will take full advantage of the language support scholarship it offers and work diligently to meet the qualifications required for enrolling in a university abroad.
This is my answer how to achieve my goals.
>>>This is my plan to achieve my goals.
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