How will you commute this Chuseok?
학생이 쓴 원문
I will commute by car this Chuseok. To go by car is faster.
To take the present for my family, it is convenient for me.
*** Hi, Donna
I will absent from class on Friday, October 10.
But, since I have already used all free reschedules,the class can not be reschedules.
Please do not worry if I do not attend that day.
See you on Monday, October 13.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jane!
Keep your eyes on the road as you drive on your way to your family in Chuseok. Have a meaningful one this year.
You have a couple of grammar suggestions. Very good!
See you on October 13.
-T. Donna~
To take the present for my family, it is convenient for me.
>> Correct!
*** Hi, Donna
I will absent from class on Friday, October 10.
But, since I have already used all free reschedules,the class can not be reschedules.
*** Hi, Donna
I will absent from class on Friday, October 10.
But, since I have already used all free reschedules,the class can not be reschedules.
Please do not worry if I do not attend that day.
See you on Monday, October 13.
See you on Monday, October 13.
>> *** Hi, Donna.
I will be absent from class on Friday, October 10.
But since I have already used all free reschedules, the class can not be rescheduled.
But since I have already used all free reschedules, the class can not be rescheduled.
Please do not worry if I do not attend that day.
See you on Monday, October 13. Very good sentences!
See you on Monday, October 13. Very good sentences!
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