How will you define \'passion\' in your own words?
학생이 쓴 원문
Without any passion, I admire say that we can not expect any success and we can often see it in individual media or social media.
Success is not anywhere without efforts and passion.
You know, without pain, no gain.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Ethan!
Thank you for submitting your opinion about the homework question I sent. ^^
I totally agree that without passion and effort, gaining success will be very difficult.
Great job in your composition as well.
I only changed the word \'say\' to \'saying\'.
\'Say\' is a verb while \'saying\' can be a noun which is also the same with a statement, motto or proverb. ^^
Well, I hope that you will have a good night!
Take care and let\'s keep on having our passion burning! ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> Or: Without any passion, I admire the saying that we can not expect any success and we can often see it in individual media or social media.
Success is not anywhere without efforts and passion.
>> CORRECT.
You know, without pain, no gain.
You know, without pain, no gain.
>> CORRECT.
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