How will you describe modern technology in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, South Korea that I believe is the fastest country among other countries. Also, there\'s the strength of IT field. Especially, I want to let you know about Kiosk. It\'s the unmanned order machine. Before Pandemic, I used not to see that, but not any more. When you visit any restaurants in here, you can see that easily.
강사 첨삭
Wonderful Monday, Elic! If it is your dream to change the world, then keep learning. Education is the most efficient key to effect the change you desire to see in the world. The more you keep learning the more you discover new things and explore new opportunities. I am always here for you. ^^
Well, South Korea that I believe is the fastest country among other countries.
>>> Well, South Korea, which I believe is the fastest country among other countries,
Also, there\'s the strength of IT field.
>>> Also, they specialized in IT.
Especially, I want to let you know about Kiosk.
>>> I especially want to let you know about Kiosk.
It\'s the unmanned order machine.
>>> CORRECT.
Before Pandemic, I used not to see that, but not any more.
>>> Before the pandemic, I used not to see that, but not any more.
When you visit any restaurants in here, you can see that easily.
>>> When you visit any restaurant here, you can see that easily.
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