How will you differentiate the music of the past from the music of this generation?
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First difference is music\'s speed. i think this generation\'s music engineers like uptempo.
Second that is lyrics. in the past lyrics most important thing was made music.
강사 첨삭
Hello Dan!
I agree with you, but which do you prefer?
I love the old songs or we could it 90\'s songs because the melody is almost the same. But that doesn\'t;t mean that I don;t enjoy listening to our modern songs.
Thank you for sharing your insights through writing.
Aki~
First difference is music\'s speed.
>>> The first difference is the speed of the music
>>> The first difference is the tempo.
I think this generation\'s music engineers like uptempo.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> I think music engineers of this generation prefer uptempo music
Second, that is lyrics.
>>> CORRECT!
in the past lyrics most important thing was made music.
>>> In the past, the most important thing in lyrics was to create music
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