How will you leave a legacy in your community?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t want to leave a legacy. I don\'t have enough property. I want to spend my money for me and my husband. I want to spend some money for my son\'s and grandchildren.
Life isn\'t long, I have to try to be fun and happy. I want to be comfortable old age. I don\'t want to depend my son\'s. So we are preparing a lot of things. We prepared insurance, work out everydays, study English. I don\'t want leave any legacy. Oh! what I leave is my funeral expense.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Ms. [Name]!
Legacy means something that is handed down or left behind from the past. It can refer to:
1. A person\'s impact or achievements - for example, \"Her legacy is the school she built for the community.\"
2. Money or property left to someone in a will.
3. Cultural or historical influence - like \"the legacy of ancient Rome.\"
See you in class!
Aki~
I don\'t want to leave a legacy.
>> CORRECT!
I don\'t have enough property.
>> CORRECT!
I want to spend my money for me and my husband.
>> CORRECT!
I want to spend some money for my son\'s and grandchildren.
>> I want to spend some money on my son\'s and grandchildren.
Life isn\'t long, I have to try to be fun and happy.
>> I want to be comfortable in old age.
I don\'t want to depend my son\'s. So we are preparing a lot of things.
>> I don\'t want to depend on my sons, so we are preparing a lot of things.
We prepared insurance, work out everydays, study English.
>> We prepared insurance, work out every day, and study English.
I don\'t want leave any legacy. Oh! what I leave is my funeral expense.
>>> I don\'t want to leave any legacy. Oh! What I leave is my funeral expenses.
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